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The animation was...moderate. There was an attempt at decent mouth animation and some minimal movements - i.e. the walking and arm movements. The jokes...were way out there. I have no clue what kind of sense of humor that is, but I have yet to know anyone who would find that laugh out loud funny. The only thing I found amusing was the Black Bear part. The poison dart joke couldve been better focused on, such as when he throws it back at the cashier a dart gets lodged in his head or something. The soda was really unnecessary...the joke surrounding that was based off a very old type of humor often found in mid 50s through 70s cartoons like Bugs Bunny and such. The only problem was that the joke was not executed well, and it was seen coming from a light year away. The voices were a good attempt with obvious lack of support for that area. I suggest trying to make the voices less...annoying though and give it some notable characteristics.
Ill give it a 3/5 for the bear and good attempts.
6/10 because of the lack of a punch on the jokes.
Keep working on it, and a lot of humor works with a whole "didnt see it coming suprise" type deal the best. Good luck on future endeavors. Unlike other reviewers I do not believe watching this was a "waste of time" because it was somewhat enjoyable.
Paz -AK-
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So, how does having a specific plot have ANYTHING to do with this type of flash? I see so many saying "wheres the plot, wheres the plot", but when you think about it...it is a dance video. Since when do dance videos have a plot. Oh wait...lemme put in a random video of people salsa dancing while a raging battle ensues between lovers and rivals in the background.
The animation was verrrry well done. I found it amusing. Music was catchy. Enough said for a 5 and a 10. Well done.
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I agree and don't agree with what the movie is saying. Mostly because any good parody I have seen combines a few humor types in them and doesn't just try to leech off the fact it is based off a popular game/movie. Most of them include minor slapstick, great situational, and usually a lot of irony. It is the "what if" factor that makes these movies original. If anyone doesn't understand what I am talking about then The Real Legend Of Zelda is a flash made about Ocarina of Time and was posted on here quite some time ago. Granted, for a good bit of the humor yo have to have played the game, but it is funny nonetheless. The "what if" factor is taking some of the most important parts of a movie/game and saying "well it would be hilarious if.....happened." It usually brings a lot of irony and some decent slapstick humor once in awhile, but it has to be based from your own ideas...not something you've already seen. That is how you start with parodies and as you go, you figure out what humor works with viewers and what doesn't. Well...because I didn't agree fully and there wasn't a lot of complication in making this sort of movie, I gave it a 4/5 because it is visually appealing and has some decent points.
-AK-
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I laughed the entire time. Your drawing style reminds me of Ren & Stimpy though, but not as choppy. Great work. Score: 5/5
-AK-
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Heofacker did kind of make a point about the whole father siuation though. Maybe further in the series have like a flashback in Lucca's memory or something to clear that up a bit on exactly what was so dangerous about her father learning more about warp portals. Besides that, the animation was smooth and well done. The music was in the right spot and at appropriate times. All in all, great job. Score: 5/5
-AK-
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Thanks! When part 2 comes out it'll clear up a lot of stuff ;)
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I thought it was funny. I had to kind of concentrate the second time through to see what all the pictures were though. There's no subliminal messaging in there from what I can see. It's just a whole load of random pictures that are funny when you add a screaming Vegeta in there. Good Job ^^. The beat of the techno helped move the flash along nicely as well.
-AK-
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Still as good as I remember it. The second time using the cat to put out the fire was hilarious because he just whips it off his head. This is definitly one of favorites of all time. Score: 5/5
-AK-
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Hilarious! The animation was right on key with the song too. You also created a humanoid bowser that still had enough of the key parts of the orginal character design so that we could tell it was him in human form. Making Mario/Luigi younger was a good touch too. The part where Luigi is kind of kicked aside was very amusing because it shows the reality of how he really is matched up to Mario. Great submission. Score: 5/5
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I must say that I'm astonished. I haven't really enjoyed a song flash like this since The Ultimate Showdown. I really applaud you on this because you have been able create a flash that hooks people by the end of the first loop and has them asking for more. I have even left this running while doing other things because the song is catchy and doesn't get boring after awhile. I hope to see/hear something like this again from you soon. Score: 5/5
-AK-
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With each new episode you can see the quality in drawings getting better and better. I would say take a look at your first episode and see how far you've come. That in itself is really something I enjoy about the series. The battles are as great as ever too. Very good story telling as well.
*Note to all other viewers* - Unless you actually follow the series, you will be confused as hell as to what's going on. So take the time to see this animator's great work.
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